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This is pretty nice.

The random tempo change caught me off guard, but I think it fits well with the overall track. It's kinda like listening to samples of a few different tracks put together.

LifeGam3rJr responds:

hehe thx i can make the song in original lengt to i just tought it wud be funich

Cool...

This sounds pretty cool. I was thinking that maybe you'd add a bit of the vocal part or something. I still think it's pretty neat though.

Y'know... This is pretty nice.

This is a pretty nice track. I just think that you'd repeated a bit more than I'd liked to hear, but that's fine. Maybe a variation could breathe a little bit of fresh air to a repetitive motif.

The percussion you did was great and it sounds nicely EQed (I hope). What I think would make your track a little bit better would be the fact that if you could change the patterns of the percussion up a bit. It sounds a bit too Amen-ish, so perhaps you could give it a bit more drive or do a little slowdown or something.

The bass, I believe, you could have boosted a bit more. After all, this is a "DnB" track, emphasis of the "B" part. Once your bass dips into like.. the C3 or C2 octave, it gets really hard to hear. I can suggest that you distort the sound a bit, or maybe just give it a boost in the bass area with an EQ.

The main motif... It's nice, as sounds like something one would expect in a DnB track. However, as this might be just my preference, I think it would do well if it sounds a bit more overdrived or something. Everytime I hear the lead, my mind is expecting it to go crazy in terms of the lead synth having the most presence in the track.

All in all, this is a great track, even if it's still incomplete. I'll be looking forward to the finished track.

Qshunt responds:

thanks for your feedback! its very much appreciated.

i wont boost the bass, as such. the problem is that the bass is all heavily aimed at around the 50hz mark. on my monitors, and my car stereo etc it sounds fine. but some speakers / headphones might not produce low enough bass. I'll rectify that before the track is finished. Ive not finished doing the bassline properly.

as far as the Amen comment goes, i actually disagree. it has a similar pattern / sequnece to a semi chopped amen, but thats where the similarities end.

you could argue that most, if not all current and older drum and bass breaks, are based (some more loosely than others) on the classic Amen break, or apache break. the drums were sequenced completely from scratch.

as for the repetition, thats also becuase it was only a short loop, that i looped a couple of times while recording. so structurally, you wont hear anywhere near as much of that bell sound once its finished. i'm only having it in the intro, and maybe after the first drop. theres still a lot more i want to add. I'm still not sure if I like that bell sound anyway :P

Thanks again!

This is quite mystifying.

This is quite a mysterious piece; I got a sense of a lurking danger that came up with the "end of the tale," almost as if it's setting up for a sequel of some sort. Y'know, like, "OMG, I JUST KILLED THIS SUPER DRAGON YAYLOL. OMFG THIS MUSIC MEANS I GOTTA KILL ANOTHER FUCKING 210321 DRAGONS AND SOME SUPER PLANET SHIT."

I liked the mysterious feeling you gave it through the wacky tones, how it kinda clashes with itself. The bit of reverbed or echo'd vocals was a nice touch.

falling responds:

I'm glad it came across that way, thank you for the review :)

Lololol

This has got some funky lyrics; made me crack up a bit. Good stuff.

WUT IZ DIZ

No seriously, what're you trying to make this time?

OneRealMusician responds:

melodies

fart
check my other stuff out

i/

Well...

First off, I would suggest to stop spamming "DON'T ZERO BOMB" because it's probably going to invoke people to start doing so.

Secondly, I'm not sure if it was intentional, but your snares sound so distant. It wouldn't hurt to give it a bit more presence.

The choir and strings could also use a bit more boosting as well.

There is a nice development as the song progresses, but I hope that it'll improve as you work on it.

Randomman4 responds:

Took your first off advice, thanks lol

As for the boosting, idk, I really just want the violin to be heard more distinctly in front of the strings and choir, but Idk, but the snare is supposed to sound far off, sorta like you would here a drummerboy playing in the middle of a field.

Wow, this is nice.

It's got that Christmas feeling to it; it's very suitable to a Santa Claus in his Lamborghini sled throwin' out presents for little kids.

I was only a tad sad that the ending was.. a little odd. The last note seems to give a "hanging" feeling towards it. But that didn't detract from the general awesomeness from this track. Great job!

Inturtle responds:

I can picture that scene vividly, but it could just be the drugs. Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you liked it. I'll be uploading the final in a few days and that should clear the cliffhanger feeling haha.

This is a nice jingle

This sounds like a nice jingle. I dunno, maybe something like a mysterious detective mouse strolling along a city trying to find a cheese bandit.

Aaroca responds:

Hahahahaha!
Cheese bandit! That's kinda weird! But I like the mouse detective idea.

Lata-bye!
-Aaroca-

This is nice!

The intro was a very nice beginning to the track. I'm amazed at how you introduced the bassline with the piano. I thought it would clash, but I was surprised that it combined so well.

On the other hand, the percussion seems a bit too weak. Your claps and kicks are barely audible, so I suggest layering more claps and kicks to strengthen them. Your reverse crash could also use a bit more work, near the higher end.

Lastly, I'm very disappointed because of the length; I hope you'll finish the track soon because I can't wait to listen to the finished track.

If I could have a moment of your time, I'd appreciate it if you could take a listen to my tracks and give them a review. Thanks :D

NewTek responds:

Alright thanks bro. I'll make sure to work on the percussion and I can see what you mean on the reverse crash. Anyways, I'll try to remember to send you a message when I post up the full version.. (:

Lastly, thanks for the review! :D

Oh and I'll make sure to check out your music ASAP.

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