Hmm..
This would probably fit into a nice dance or trance breakdown, but as a standalone for a classical piece, I probably would say the effects that you have put on it really detracts from the sound of the melody. I like the melody that you have; it was done very nicely on the right hand, as well to the left hand, which complemented the melody quite well.
Perhaps if you lowered the reverb on it and had a more natural sounding piano, I think it'll fit more into a classical setting instead of an dance/trance breakdown.
If you don't mind, please take a minute of your time to review a track of mine; comments are greatly appreciated :D