Well...
First off, I would suggest to stop spamming "DON'T ZERO BOMB" because it's probably going to invoke people to start doing so.
Secondly, I'm not sure if it was intentional, but your snares sound so distant. It wouldn't hurt to give it a bit more presence.
The choir and strings could also use a bit more boosting as well.
There is a nice development as the song progresses, but I hope that it'll improve as you work on it.