Sorry, this is like massacre of Fruity Loops
What's this supposed to be? The noise is freaking annoying. You could've just looped the first 5-10 seconds of it. And it doesn't loop perfectly. Might as well just put in a sequence and just play it for an hour.
Give up. Sorry, but give up.
"Give up. Sorry, but give up"?
i have been making music for 15 years, so, sorry man. i am not going to give up, just because you dont like a fl loop i wrote in 20 seconds.
Sorry, but no.
I'm really sorry, but everything is so out of time. You can't just mash random beats here and there. It doesn't sound right. The melody part wasn't half bad, but it just repeats an indefinite amount of times. Go listen to some other songs, then go listen to your own songs. You'll understand once you hear other song's percussion parts.
Better luck next time.
Thanx for the advice! i m just starting to get a hang of this software so all comments are good comments at this point. also, please check out my other songs, repost!
You're so wack
You're so wack, You're so wack
(repeat x times where x is equal to amount of times played divided by amount of life
author has)
i dont know what a "wack" is, but im a person
Oh man ><
This isn't... bad, but it's not great either. It sounds like you just sped it up 10 bmps, especially Daddy Yankee's lyrics, it sounds like he's on speed. It's actually not that bad... But I don't know if it's slow... Probably what you did is overtaking the lyrics.
Nice twist, keep it up.
i know what you mean.. its little slow, but i tryed with more tempo and then daddy yankee rapped too fast ^^) this is perfect speed up. the original song was very slow. but thanks for your comment , im happy that you like it because i like it too =)
Woooooh...
This is some heavy shit... I like it. Also, I voted five <_< someone's zero bombing...
Also does give the feeling of a "system crash".
Good job and keep it up!
That's why I don't submit often. Damn zero bombers make me feel like I can't make music =[
I'm glad you like it though!
LOLOL
You, sir, are a funny person. I like that. Make some more of this kinda stuff...
I'm fairly funny....... okay I'm freakin' hillarious, but, whatever
Woh...
You just messed around with an already done piece of work... That's kind of... stealing... kinda. I don't know... 12 minutes of this? I'm not sure if I can stand it.
Try harder, or just make something different.
i can stand it
just heard it from start to end its awesome !!@#!
Nice, nice
Not bad, it sounds pretty good. However, at 0:53, that one note sounds off key. And that happens a few more times. If you fix that note, I can probably say that this is one heck of a song. Keep it up!
I will fix that right now. Is there a way i can do this without removing reviews?
Is this song supposed to be upbeat?
I'm just wondering because I'm not sure whether the title fits the song or not. <_<
It does seem that your main synth has a bit too much noise in it, you might want to reduce it if you can.
The hi hats needs to be turned down just a bit. It stands out a bit too much.
Other than that, you're off to a great start, keep it up!
Also, check out my songs, I need some loving too
Lol, alright, thanks for the review!
Ehhh..
It's clipping a lot. It almost sounds as if you're pulling the midi out and just sticking a kick in there, not to say you actually did, but you get the idea.
Lack of drums is kinda a no-no. Especially with Big Blue.
You might also want to variate the synths that you use. Seems like everything is just jumbled up together...
Keep trying.
Good night! 8D
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